My life as of now...

Logan, UT, United States
Hello! My name is Alyson Shepherd. I love to plan events and hope to make it my career someday. I am not shy by any means and know what I want in life. I love to be involved in almost everything and find that diving right in is the best and most exciting way to learn something new. I truly love to gain a sense of culture and never want to become complacent when it comes to discovering new people and new ways of doing things. I have a wonderful life with everything I could need!

Thursday, September 18, 2008

Press Release 2 Draft

September 18, 2008
FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

James E. Muellenbach III, CEO
123 Healthy Way
Gary, IN 46401
Phone: 877-745-4321
E-mail: james@burgerplanet.com



BURGER PLANET
A fast and healthy way to eat


Burger Planet has always valued their customers and has a desire to fullfill their wants and needs. Burger Planet wants to keep you living your lives in the healthiest way possible and know thats what you want for yourselves as well. To better cater to the wants and needs of our customers, we are excited to announce the hiring of Jayne Petersen. Jayne recently worked with Opal Whitcomb to lose 75 pounds. Opal has had Jayne as a guest on her show for her expertise in helping people stay healthy.

Founder of Burger Planet, James E. Muellenbach says, "Jayne Petersen and Burger Planet share a commitment toward health. The women Jayne Petersen have helped lose weight, eat at Burger Planet."

Jayne agrees saying, "Burger Planet has been a leader in the Quick Service Restaurant industry in offering healthy menu choices. The company believes in encouraging customers to live healthier, active lifestyles and I have spent my life tyring to teach women that lesson."

For more information please contact Alyson Shepherd at 801-725-8379 or email at alyson.shepherd@aggiemail.usu.edu

Now, with even more menu items, the possibilities for eating healthy at Burger Planet are even better. Burger Planet is commited in working closely with Jayne and looks forward to a continued positive response from their loyal customers.




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2 comments:

Amy said...

Hey Alyson! I thought this was a well written draft. I especially liked the way you have thrown in a little of your own style. To give a little feedback: my only suggestion would be to split up your opening paragraph. Sometimes I feel like if you have too much in the first paragraph you start to loose information. Just a suggestion; keep up the great work

Allie Cat said...

Good job Alyson! Just remember to put your contact information at the bottom.